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Holy crap. I need the next chapter. Do you understand? I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER! This is so remarkble, that I think you need to publish it when it is ...

Wow! Ok, this is a different turn from what your other stories are like. I like it. I can't find any mistakes, but I really hope you continue, and fast! ...

I liked it, I really did, but the ending didn't seem to fit well with the rest if this poiece, you know? I reall can't explain it that well. Sorry. ...

Wow. So sad, but excellently written. Your wording was up to date, and your fluency was marvelous. The only thing was that I was a little confused in the first ...

That was short and sweet, but it described the point perfectly. I liked the ending. Nicely worded and done. I do agree with bigbadbear about something though, the never ever ...

I'm sorry, this may be cruel, but the end ,made me laugh. I really enjoy this series, and I think that you are helping a lot of people out there ...

Thank you thank you thank you! Finally, a girl has stood up and said that women can and will be warriors too! I'm tired of all guys thinking that they ...

Holy cow. Good flow, imaginary and heart. I could feel the meadow beneathe the sky and i could see the sea-gulls flying. Good use of adjectives and nouns. Praise: *the ...

Whoa, deep. I really liked it, but I couldn't find the flow. It feels kinda meshed together, no? Good points about it: *nice expressions *your words are descriptive *the second ...

Whoa! Don't we all wish that that would happen? LOVE IT!! Specially the ending! Caught me off gaurd! *gives gold star* I would give you multiple gold stars, but it ...

I liked it. Very excellent way of putting Lily into severus's nightmare/love dreams. I've never seen someone write about harry potter like this, and i think i like it. *good ...

For your first poem, excellent. I like the way you talk about the girl coming back from weed and drugs and becoming into a better person because of love. The ...

un-notice I think that it is supposed to be un-noticed, right? “Oh and one more thing do not underesamate her.” Kakashi nods and walks away.[/quote] You need a comma after ...

Sometimes, When I look upon a spider I think of you. You, In all your deadly beauty, Master of your universe. Your web, A glittering galaxy, Abound in constellations. And ...

wow. i loved the 4th stanza, it really got to me. everyone has really found everything else, so i just want to congratulate you, because that was a REALLY GOOD ...